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Here I will be,
Waiting for you,
Always wondering,
When the time will come,
When our hearts finally meet.

In the past,
My heart had been broken,
Broken so many times,
That the pieces of glass, Were so small,
They couldn't be pieced together.

But you,
You did something that was
The impossible,
You gave me a new heart,
A heart without any bruises,
A heart without any bends,
You gave me a heart,
That is so brave,
It glows bright,
So bright, That I am no longer afraid,
Afraid of my fears from the past.

In the past,
I would have never thought that such a thing,
Would be possible,
But that is love,
Love is something that amazes us,
Its powers are so unparalleled,
That we can't even begin to understand,
What lies behind the word, Love.
It is so powerful it gives us something that escapes us, Bravery.

Here I will be,
Waiting for you,
Hoping to find the answer,
To what Love truly is.

So Please,
The person I will love,
Look at me,
Our appearance may be different,
Our levels of Bravery are different.
But our hearts
Can glow together.
As a star,
Brighter any than before us.

Here I will be,
Waiting for you.
Always wondering,
If a time will come,
When our hearts finally meet.
A poem about the one I love. <3
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princesssudi Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Very lovely and beautiful :)
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ShadowCatofHell Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... You're a good poet.
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uzmon123321 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
Thanks dude. Im really happy that you believe that. I dont even consider myself a poet yet. I feel as though there is alot I must learn in the future. But just being called a "poet" is the biggest complement in the world :)
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ShadowCatofHell Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Keep working on it. The more you write, the better you get. I found that out over hte last few years :)
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SaekoCivillianRebel Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i spent five minutes typing this comment, trying to think of another word besides "beautiful" to use,
the best i came up with is:

surreal and breath-taking
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uzmon123321 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
You dont know how much this comment means haha Thanks dude ur the best :)
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SaekoCivillianRebel Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thx!
yes, one of the most frightening things about being a writer is showing others your work, I write a lot, and have experiences this many times,
keeping creating works like this, they're gold!
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uzmon123321 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
Well i feel like the scariest part about being a writer is whether or work is good or not. At first I based my writing on people's feedback to tell me if a poem was good or not. But now i know, "if a poem speaks to you, It can be considered a success." So i find that as long as it speaks a story, a event or even a feeling it is something that should be shown and experienced by others. :)
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SaekoCivillianRebel Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
um, wow, that is an amazing philosophy to go by
i still sort of get all nervous when ever some ones reading my work
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uzmon123321 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
Its something that we all need to overcome at one point. Im sure u will get past it :)
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