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An Angel,
An Angel on this Field of Ice,
Notices,
I hesitantly step on this,
Field of Ice.
This surface of ice,
It is but the most slippery,  
And Daunting
Field of ice.

I try moving slowly,
On this surface of ice,
But my Crooked skates,
Knock me off balance.
As I start to fall,
For the very first time,
I accept help,
And In no time,
A hand catches me within the fall,
She catches me from my misery,
And helps me escape the pain,
From this,
Field Of Ice.

She then,
With the sweetest voice,
Asks me,"Are you OK?",
Even though I seem afraid,
I nod aimlessly,
While I reach for her fragile hand,
I grab her hand firmly,
With the the grip even death itself,
Knows to be too tight.
This grip is,
Painful,
Hurtful,
And Almost unbearable.
Even though it is so hard,
For her to bear,
She continues to hold my hand,
Helping me inch forward on this slippery,
Field of Ice,

At first we move slowly,
But our speed gradually increases,
Suddenly,
She lets go,
Telling me, "I will be back"
I watch her carefully.
As she zooms past me with her graceful speed,
I notice the aura brighten the ice under her.
For the very first time,
I feel as though I have seen,
An Angel,
An Angel on this,
Field of Ice.
A poem about my Beautiful Angel
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braverave Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow.
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Rockin-billy Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Cooool
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
That was very interesting. I like it!
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